A Cabinet of Curiosities by koinoyokan
Apr 3, 2020 6:29:01 GMT -5
Post by Radrook Admin on Apr 3, 2020 6:29:01 GMT -5
A Cabinet of Curiosities by koinoyokan
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Review
I find this poem, composed from the first person singular point of view, to be primarily an extended metaphor indirectly describing someone who is in a death chamber being gassed to death .during WWII in a Nazi Death camp while the patrons [the SS Guards?]stand motionlessly watching outside.
I say partially, because I cannot reconcile the trees and that particular tree with that scenario. In any, case, here are the parts that do seem to justify understanding.
The person sleeps? Sleep is often used as a symbol of death.
In a chamber where fumes suddenly intrude?
The heat of an oven seems to fit. It can be understood as a reference to the incineration that took place after the fumes. Sleep can be understood as death of the cadavers after the fumes kills everyone within the gas chamber. The paleness of death temporarily glows with the heat of the furnace as the incineration takes place.
How is that oven a greenhouse is problematic, since greenhouses are designed to promote life, not terminated it.
The fumes are green? Some poisonous gasses, such as chlorine, are green. They were used during the First World War. Soldiers in trenches could see the green clouds of poison approaching from a distance.
Observers? Some Nazi weirdos ’enjoyed looking at the death throes of the people being gassed to death.
Days go by? Counting the days as the the observers look on?
That can be understood as hyperbole. Such moments of imminent death or sheer terror do seem to drag on forever. As the poisonous gas takes effect, the victims feel their hearts beat slower until they stop.
Oddity?
The writhing mass of dying people and then inert corpses are indeed an oddity on display in that cage since such a scene is not a common occurrence.
The ocean of green suffocation can be understood as the poisonous chlorine gas pumped in through ventilation shafts. The speaker refrains from breathing trying to stay alive to alive as long as possible. Not an unusual reaction. Instinctive in a way. .
Suggestion
Within a cage is far more easy to visualize than beneath one. It also fits in better with what is described further on.
The following part does not fit in with my interpretation. So if it were my poem, I would be inclined to delete it.
“Rendered solid by the
Flesh of the giving tree”
Of course, you as as the author probably had something entirely different in mind. But poetry is often open to many interpretations. Some of Robert Frost's poems were understood in ways that Frost himself said were completely contrary to what he originally had in mind. So no harm is intended.
A very interesting poem. Looking forward to reading more of your compositions. Thanks for sharing.
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Addendum
I just realized that I failed to take the title into consideration. That title would perhaps have led me to hesitate and to consider another line of interpretation as more viable or appropriate. On the other hand, I might simply have recommended a change of title.
Link to Poem
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