Stream of Consciousness style With No Paragraphing
Mar 28, 2020 10:37:59 GMT -5
Post by Radrook Admin on Mar 28, 2020 10:37:59 GMT -5
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Obsessive Compulsive Disorder.
www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/mazerette/Obsessive-Compulsive-Disorder-139443
Obsessive Compulsive Disorder.
www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/mazerette/Obsessive-Compulsive-Disorder-139443
Copy of my Review
Radrook here to provide a review. Please note that I try to help and not offend. However if by any chance I do offend, you have my apologies beforehand for that indiscretion. The composition focuses on OCD and very graphically describes how it drastically affects the victim. It also describes how people can misunderstand the symptoms.
OCD can definitely incapacitate a person by interfering with the person’s social interactions with his environment and with others on a social basis. A person preoccupied with intense concerns can’t be expected to excel at tasks that require unwavering concentration. The obsessive thoughts will tend to short-circuit the concentration causing the person to have to start again or take up where he left off.
That’s similar to taking three steps forward and one backwards over and over. The frustration involved is indeed traumatic and definitely no laughing matter. Unfortunately, the untrained or ignorant simply dismiss such behavior under the generic category if crazy. Others, such as the one described in the composition might just say it it a personality quirk typical of a certain age. It is understandable that such a reaction is frustrating to the sufferer. It also prevents those in charge of a minor from getting him or her the required medical help. Such help can be in the form of medication which restores certain chemical imbalances and prevents obsessive thoughts from recurring.
Kinds of Medications that might Help OCD
iocdf.org/about-ocd/treatment/meds/
Thanks for writing this composition in order to help dispel the misunderstandings.
Suggestion:
The use of paragraphs and other spacing would greatly improve readability. Otherwise the block of text on the page is intimidating and discourages a reading.
mazerette says...
Thanks, this is just a stream of consciousness piece so it wasn't intended to have any structure other than what it was originally written with. Thanks for reading, no offense taken. Very good explanation of OCD.
Radrook says...
Stream of consciousness can still benefit from paragraphing.