Thanks for the review and encouraging words. Very much appreciated. Please note that the glow of youth no longer graces their cheeks. Which means that they are old and have suffered the consequences of the fall. I added white flowers to the location because white flowers are usually the ones used at funerals. So the location itself had undergone a drastic change. Nevertheless your comments have focused on a possible flaw in the narrative that might mislead or confuse the reader and I will definitely give it my full consideration to see how it can be avoided. Thanks for the help
Last Edit: Dec 20, 2022 23:55:52 GMT -5 by Radrook Admin
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