Thanks for the review and encouraging words. Very much appreciated. Please note that the glow of youth no longer graces their cheeks. Which means that they are old and have suffered the consequences of the fall. I added white flowers to the location because white flowers are usually the ones used at funerals. So the location itself had undergone a drastic change. Nevertheless your comments have focused on a possible flaw in the narrative that might mislead or confuse the reader and I will definitely give it my full consideration to see how it can be avoided. Thanks for the help
Radrook Admin: Welcome to all the new members and thank you all for joining the forum. For some strange reason, it is only now that I was informed that others had joined. My apologies.
Aug 13, 2023 4:37:21 GMT -5
Radrook Admin: Welcome to the Forum Sanya!
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Radrook Admin: Welcome to the forum Abdul! Thanks for joining!
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Radrook Admin: Yes, sooner or later this entire website will disappear with everything posted on it for lack of finding someone to take over when I croak. But it won't be because you folks are refusing to respond. That I can guarantee.
Feb 26, 2023 7:10:41 GMT -5
Radrook Admin: That's one reason why I stopped providing long insights into the chess games I play. It's like speaking to the wall.
Feb 26, 2023 7:06:45 GMT -5
Radrook Admin: Funny how I can have approx. 400 people at one point browsing, and not one of them wants to give feedback nor participate in any way manner or form. Not even a simple click with a like.
Feb 26, 2023 7:03:49 GMT -5
Radrook Admin: Funny how these discussion forums were all the rage once until Twitter and YouTube and other such discussion venues came along.
Feb 13, 2023 8:40:52 GMT -5
Radrook Admin: I wish visitors would say something instead of just reading and leaving in silence. Or at the least, at least have the courtesy to rate the material.
Feb 4, 2023 21:26:37 GMT -5
Radrook Admin: Thinking that doctors are beyond criticism no matter what is a cultural trait I do not share.
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Radrook Admin: Reporting physician malpractice might save someone else from getting murdered.
Jan 31, 2023 9:10:52 GMT -5
Radrook Admin: Funny how nobody believes you when you describe physician malpractice until it happens to them-isn't it.
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Radrook Admin: Just restored the History section. Hopefully this one won't disappear like the last one did.
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